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1. I do think I have improved a lot in terms of spoken English and thereby my English speaking should have reached band 6.
2. I do think I have improved a lot and thereby should have reached band 6 in terms of English speaking.
which one is better?
The first one has different subject(I/my English speaking) for each simple sentence, but it is clear that both simple sentence are talking about "English speaking".
The second one has the same subject(I) for each simple sentence, but it may be not clear the first simeple sentence(I have improved a lot) are talking about English speaking.
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3. My english is good and i should be in band 6
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(Original post by zhai)
1. I do think I have improved a lot in terms of spoken English and thereby my English speaking should have reached band 6.
2. I do think I have improved a lot and thereby should have reached band 6 in terms of English speaking.
which one is better?
The former is better
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