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Everyday, too many times a day, that dreaded word is spoken. Cancer. Innocent children across the world are getting wounded and killed… every second of every day. These poor victims family say the killers name is cancer.

This is Theresa, who recently turned 4. She was due to start nursery when she collapsed and received the devastating and heart-breaking news that she has cancer.

How is she supposed to live her life to the fullest when she knows she only has a few months to live? She doesn't know what happiness is; but do you blame her? Theresa is not alone. There are millions of children who are currently being destroyed because of this fatal disease. It’s in your hands to make a difference; help donate money and spread awareness about childhood cancer.

Almost everyone has been touched by it, either by a family member or a friend. Maybe your child doesn't have cancer. At one point, neither did the ones who suffer till this day. Do you think its okay to pretend we don’t know about this? Ask yourself, would you let your own child live an excruciating life? No, you won’t and that’s what makes you the perfect person to change the agonizing situation of our children.
All of this sounds horrible, and it is, but there are actions YOU can take. We can prevent all of this from happening. We need to get an adequate amount of people to be aware of this and if everyone donates some small amount of money, many children can be saved and have much longer lives.

The littlest thing could make the most significant and meaningful difference. The first step is a thought. Having the right mind set and wanting to change the lives of our kids is important. You can then take it from there and donate just one pound a month. That’s all it takes.

Could you ever watch a small, weak and an innocent child die right before your very eyes? More than thousands of kids across the world are slowly and surely being destroyed, all under the age of 6. Let’s work together and help drop the numbers in the amount of children that are affected by cancer. Together, we can have a voice and save the lives of our children and create a bigger generation.