what grade would I get for this,? I still need to do a conclusion.Watch
It's looking good, but you would have to write more for a higher grade if this is for an essay or controlled assessment. Perhaps develop ideas further, with embedded quotes. I have just done a controlled assessment on how Steinbeck presents life on the ranch.
Thanks for the advice.and yes I do need to write more as the minimum is 600 words and I have 602.
how do you think we adapt and use spoken language for: formality, emotion and other lang. features?
PS. had this as homework about 2 years ago when iwas doin gcses, and was going to throw away my english book when i came across it and realised it did quite badly.
I did this also a few years ago for GCSE, loved Of Mice and Men I got an A in English Lang and an A in English Lit. For example, saying "This is shown by the quote..." is very basic, rather I would be looking for "This is shown by the declarative sentence...", although you probably don't get taught that sort of vocab until you get to A level. However, using terminology such as that will help show off what you can do