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It's a song I wrote and recorded at home. I call myself a shower singer so don't expect anything too good.

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for a second i thought it was Lorde singing
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for a second i thought it was Lorde singing
I almost thought I was unique...
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I almost thought I was unique...
im not trying to say it was bad, i just managed to relate to lorde after hearing it!

do you have any more songs that you've done, your voice is pretty good
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im not trying to say it was bad, i just managed to relate to lorde after hearing it!

do you have any more songs that you've done, your voice is pretty good
Yes, I do. They are on my youtube channel.
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I'll give it a listen in the morning - house is asleep and no headphones

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Yes, I do. They are on my youtube channel.
i just checked it out before you replied, fate has to be my favourite

for anyone else who wants to check out her music (its really good) click this link:
https://www.youtube.com/user/wedothisable/feed
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I like it

How did you come up with the song idea? :3
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dank
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I like it

How did you come up with the song idea? :3
Well, I wanted to write something about people who want to benefit from you and somehow ended up with this song.
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It's not exactly my genre, but I have to admit your voice is quite good.

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Like it
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I left a comment on the video. Honestly. It is really nice. Great job
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I left a comment on the video. Honestly. It is really nice. Great job
pleased to hear that
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You have a nice voice

If you want a bit of constructive criticism, I'd turn up the instruments up or the vocals down, just because it's difficult to hear the music too clearly.

Also at around 0:48 and again at 1:36 it seems to go silent for a split second, I dunno if that was intended but you might want to try and fill that somehow.

Otherwise it's not really my style of music but I can recognise you have a good voice, and lyrically it seems solid.
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You have a nice voice

If you want a bit of constructive criticism, I'd turn up the instruments up or the vocals down, just because it's difficult to hear the music too clearly.

Also at around 0:48 and again at 1:36 it seems to go silent for a split second, I dunno if that was intended but you might want to try and fill that somehow.

Otherwise it's not really my style of music but I can recognise you have a good voice, and lyrically it seems solid.
I've tried to turn up the instruments and the other way but when I save the song, it's the same. No idea why.
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I think it is a really good creative piece you have produced and your voice is good too.
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I think it is a really good creative piece you have produced and your voice is good too.
Thank you.
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