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    comment on how I could improve my blog

    http://justmollblog.blogspot.com/
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    (Original post by Justmoll28)
    comment on how I could improve my blog

    http://justmollblog.blogspot.com/
    I liked your makeup product review post!
    It's really weird but I have some products from that exact Ted Baker line + the Bodyshop Body Butter (in Raspberry, Cranberry, Cocoa and Mango!) and the Simple moisturiser. :lolwut:
    Your photography is really good too!

    In terms of improvement...hmmm, I'd probably say make a few more pages to keep your content separate. One could be purely for your photography, one for beauty reviews, etc.
    That way readers wouldn't need to keep scrolling past posts they weren't interested in and be able to choose what they wanted to read (if that makes any sense)!
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    I quite like it. Nice, simple and bright. But maybe just a tiny suggestion, how about having your 'About Me' section at the top (Right hand side or in the middle ) rather than all the way at the bottom. Idk, it just gives the page more focus, and readers can actually know a bit about you before delving in for the read
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    (Original post by Mochassassin)
    I liked your makeup product review post!
    It's really weird but I have some products from that exact Ted Baker line + the Bodyshop Body Butter (in Raspberry, Cranberry, Cocoa and Mango!) and the Simple moisturiser. :lolwut:
    Your photography is really good too!

    In terms of improvement...hmmm, I'd probably say make a few more pages to keep your content separate. One could be purely for your photography, one for beauty reviews, etc.
    That way readers wouldn't need to keep scrolling past posts they weren't interested in and be able to choose what they wanted to read (if that makes any sense)!
    thank you for the advice, i dont know to make different pages haha could you tell me how to?
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    (Original post by Justmoll28)
    thank you for the advice, i dont know to make different pages haha could you tell me how to?
    No problem!
    Erm, I actually haven't used blogspot/blogger in years! Here's a link which should explain it though:
    https://support.google.com/blogger/answer/165955?hl=en
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    (Original post by Lyrical Prodigy)
    I quite like it. Nice, simple and bright. But maybe just a tiny suggestion, how about having your 'About Me' section at the top (Right hand side or in the middle ) rather than all the way at the bottom. Idk, it just gives the page more focus, and readers can actually know a bit about you before delving in for the read
    ive moved it to the top now, thank you for having a read!
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    I'd also appreciate any feedback anyone can give thanks!
 
 
 
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