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    I would appreciate it if anyone could mark this piece of descriptive writing and leave a gcse grade and a mark out of 20 based on marking criteria.
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    A, I think.
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    I don't know how to mark this but I have a little bit of advice.

    You clearly have an excellent vocabulary, however at points it feels like you have just tried as hard as you can to get lots of long words in. I am also guilty of this at times and you should be able to get over it with practice.
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