IThe most adorable idea for a short romantic novel! <3

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MylittlePlusle
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A man/woman joins a baking course and is paired with a man/woman.

They get to know each other as they bake and they find out that they both have furbabies.

Their furbabies are called Amy and Lilly<3 Lilly is black and Amy is white.
They fall in deep love with each other. <3

The man/woman proposes to thier love via having a baking themed proposal

When they get married their furbabies are walking down the aisle with their wedding rings on their collars! <3
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Sounds crap.
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You know a story (even a short one) needs a plot right? And you need to show the reader why the couple fall in love (hint: both owning cats is not going to convince anyone two people love each other).

Also, you seem to have put more thought into the descriptions of the cats than the ACTUAL PEOPLE who your story is about.
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