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    Hey!

    I'm currently in the midst of writing my personal statement for postgraduate studies at a number of universities. In the effort of self-improvement, I'm wondering if there's anyone who's genuinely interested in giving my first PS draft a read and provide constructive criticism and feedback on how I can strengthen it?

    Subject is Entrepreneurship.

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    Don't send your PS to anyone over the internet - it could easily be plagiarised
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    (Original post by HayThereMardyBum)
    Hey!

    I'm currently in the midst of writing my personal statement for postgraduate studies at a number of universities. In the effort of self-improvement, I'm wondering if there's anyone who's genuinely interested in giving my first PS draft a read and provide constructive criticism and feedback on how I can strengthen it?

    Subject is Entrepreneurship.

    Cheers


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    I'd be happy to - though I study science at uni so not sure how much help I will be!
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    (Original post by HayThereMardyBum)
    Hey!

    I'm currently in the midst of writing my personal statement for postgraduate studies at a number of universities. In the effort of self-improvement, I'm wondering if there's anyone who's genuinely interested in giving my first PS draft a read and provide constructive criticism and feedback on how I can strengthen it?

    Subject is Entrepreneurship.

    Cheers


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    You shouldn't show your personal statement to anyone (except teachers) let alone send it to someone over the internet. That's just my opinion anyway, maybe I am missing some information though.
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    I was here a few years ago and I thought TSR had PS review thing going on? I know I did it for my undergrad PS, or am I missing something?


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    (Original post by HayThereMardyBum)
    I was here a few years ago and I thought TSR had PS review thing going on? I know I did it for my undergrad PS, or am I missing something?


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    There was a free service, but now it is a paid service done by teachers. However, I'm not sure that they would do postgrad PSs, even if you want to pay for it
 
 
 

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