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- 13-09-2015 16:04
- 13-09-2015 16:06
iam writing a letter to argue any ideas how i could improve so far? thx
Dear Miss Andrews,I personally would like to write to you because I am concerned and against your indictment thoughts over British teenagers I felt compelled to write to you after reading your horrendous article. You present British teenagers like they are animals, it was hard for me to understand that you describe teenagers in a derogatory way even though you are British yourself.
Americans portrayed us as “uncontrollable”,this does not mean you have to be controversial toward their thoughts. You claimed that “British youth are violent, drunken and out of control”, have you even sighted a teenager acting foolishly? Some teenagers are compelled into committing despicable acts, this could be because they have had bad experiences and issues in their past lives, therefore you have no right to be prejudice towards suffering teenagers in the UK. There maybe a few teenagers that are “drunken”, but that’s because of the bad influential people they have around them.