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    No edits allowed. Write down what you're feeling :~)
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    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue.
    I feel pretty happy.
    Not all poems rhyme.
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    A haiku -

    Politics are bad.
    They are dirty and corrupt.
    It makes me so sad.
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    (Original post by SeanFM)
    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue.
    I feel pretty happy.
    Not all poems rhyme.
    Your face is red
    But now it's blue
    I guess I should probably
    Stop choking you
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    So many choices
    Makes me full off noises
    Shout? or Pout? Not a clue.
    Uni courses
    Makes me full off clauses
    Application is nearly done
    But still confused about the courses!

    (doesn't make sense, forgotten what a poem is lol)
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    My eyes are red
    Bed duvet is blue
    Waking up 7 tomorrow
    boo hoo hoooo ;(
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    Roses are red
    Violets are red
    My eyes are red
    Your face is red
    Blood is red
    Death is red
    My vision is red
    kill...
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    My bedroom smells really nice wow what is this
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    Ok real talk

    Why do I have to be tired?
    Why couldn't I just be rewired?
    There's something inside me, burning like fire
    Gotta call my manager, maybe he'll rehire

    #madtingzzz
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    Here I sit,
    Broken hearted...
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    I feel new. New like the smell of freshly cut grass
    On a breezy summer's day.
    New, like the smell of that brand new car
    that you pick up and drive away.
    New, I suppose, like that newborn child
    Beginning its life today.
    New, because I love and I'm loved
    And I'm grateful for it every day
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    Roses are red
    My mate's name is Dave
    This poem makes no sense
    Microwave
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    (Original post by WoodyMKC)
    Roses are red
    My mate's name is Dave
    This poem makes no sense
    Microwave
    What show is that from again?:ahee::ahee::ahee:

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    My eyes are droopy
    My mind is loopy
    I wish I had a rupee
    Bc then I'd be able to buy so much YOGHURT, whoopie! :woo:

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    (Original post by angelcake123)
    What show is that from again?:ahee::ahee::ahee:

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    If it's from a show, I have 0 idea which :lol: Read it somewhere on the internetz ages ago.
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    (Original post by WoodyMKC)
    If it's from a show, I have 0 idea which :lol: Read it somewhere on the internetz ages ago.
    Ah I've definitely heard it somewhere and I larff evry tiem (laugh every time). But it might have been the internet rofl

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    (Original post by angelcake123)
    Ah I've definitely heard it somewhere and I larff evry tiem (laugh every time). But it might have been the internet rofl

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    LMAO I just googled it, if you look under images someone actually had it as a tattoo :rofl: Legend...
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    Be prepared for the realest poem so far:

    Walking and talking is something that I hardly ever do,
    because having the confidence of Hawking is something that I never knew.
    A wise man tried to convince me that for me it's nothing new,
    but any efforts to progress me will not be done by a talking to.

    I am a public hater
    and a personality grater.
    I regret to say that if I see a pretty girl I might rate her.
    This could be followed by an instant dream to date her,
    but she'd probably say no so I'll be composing theories to slate her and bait her
    into doing something full of evil.
    Perhaps I would beat her up until she is clear from my sight?
    I might.
    Or perhaps the opposite- like saving her from a fight.
    Oh, the thought is delight!
    She's a proper chav so she would probably get as high as a kite.
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    Don't be upset,
    Don't shed a tear,
    So much to say and not enough words
    Just know I'm here and I hope to stay,
    So come and see me
    Let our eyes speak, the truth will communicate
    Just for one moment
    It's necessary for me, necessary for you
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    (Original post by Kittyboy)
    No edits allowed. Write down what you're feeling :~)
    Going crazy with this love,
    Seems I need help from above,
    To be held in your embrace,
    Is the one thing I still chase,
    Wanna get you right in bed,
    Sing you songs until you're red,
    Me, impatient? Not the case,
    I'll be happy with your pace,

    If you could give me just one chance,
    Something more than just a glance,
    I'm being held in this cruel trance,
    But rejection is still your stance.

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    Just been listening to Maroon 5 - Feelings for the past 1/2 hour lol. So that piece was kinda derived from that song. But spun it a bit my way, cos i didn't want to write a poem about sex sex sex now now now, like the usual Maroon 5 songs ;D

    It's not about anyone in particular, just felt like writing it to be honest. I think it kinda fell flat at the end but then again I was having a hard time writing that last verse and tying everything in a neat bow.

    Tell me what you think
 
 
 
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