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"Hitler regarded the Treaty of Versailles a deterrent from achieving his foreign policy."
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(Original post by HenryKenry)
"Hitler regarded the Treaty of Versailles a deterrent from achieving his foreign policy."
"Hitler regarded the Treaty of Versailles a deterrent from achieving his foreign policy."
Hitler regarded the Treaty of Versailles as a deterrent to achieving his foreign policy
makes more sense, but why deterrent?
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(Original post by Good bloke)
Not much.
Hitler regarded the Treaty of Versailles as a deterrent to achieving his foreign policy
makes more sense, but why deterrent?
Not much.
Hitler regarded the Treaty of Versailles as a deterrent to achieving his foreign policy
makes more sense, but why deterrent?
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I would probably phrase it: "Hitler viewed the Treaty of Versailles as preventing him from achieving his foreign policy." Or, depending on the context, I might phrase it completely differently. Iunno.
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(Original post by HenryKenry)
Its A level coursework, my teacher said my writing is to simple so I want to make it seem more intelligent. Any better words?
Its A level coursework, my teacher said my writing is to simple so I want to make it seem more intelligent. Any better words?
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(Original post by Good bloke)
The best word is the one that conveys your meaning. I have not worked out what you are trying to say. Why deterrent?
The best word is the one that conveys your meaning. I have not worked out what you are trying to say. Why deterrent?
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(Original post by HenryKenry)
Ok so a little context- Hitler wanted to rearm, which was one his FP aims. However, the treaty of versailles forbid im to, thus it was almost an obstacle which stood in his way from achieving his aims.
Ok so a little context- Hitler wanted to rearm, which was one his FP aims. However, the treaty of versailles forbid im to, thus it was almost an obstacle which stood in his way from achieving his aims.
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