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Struggling with opening - Biomedical Science Personal Statement

Hi i have got my middle and ending sorted in my personal statement but i am dont have any creative ideas for the opening. My tutor said its all good apart from this as the sentences are too long and its pretty boring. does anyone have any ideas?
You need to focus on introducing why you are interested in the subject. Anything anyone suggests won't be able to be used because of plagiarism

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