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    Hi, I'm an aspiring songwriter and musician and I started playing guitar in June. I have written a few tracks and they are work in progress, it's just me and my guitar (with the accompaniments played by my teacher) at the moment so it's all a bit bare bones with know vocals, drums or bass parts but I'd like some feedback on two of my tracks as they are now:

    1. "Rivers of Gold" - About waking up on the first day of a Summer holiday and realising that you can stay in bed while everyone else goes off to work :
    https://soundcloud.com/serotonin-17/...-of-goldsummer

    2. "Ocean Song" - About...the ocean I guess:
    https://soundcloud.com/serotonin-17/ocean-song

    3. "Rain" - Just one guitar - walking alone down a quiet empty street on a rainy night:
    https://soundcloud.com/serotonin-17/melody-5
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    I think they are all very good! I enjoyed listening to them, they flowed nicely and were pleasant to listen to. I think they are lovely as they are
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    I really liked them!!(coming from someone who isn't usually keen on guitars) and you should definitely compose some more! Have you thought up any vocals for the song yet? Would love to see them if so
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    Thanks both of you! This is very encouraging
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    It's lovely. I can imagine listening to your tracks while sitting out on a couch overseeing the huge greenland infront of me where cows and goats are passing by.
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    Not really my style. And it got boring and repetitive very quickly with you just playing arpeggios the whole time. You should record the song in the key of the description (ie the rain one should be minor). Again its not my style as someone who only likes metal but it may be someone elses style.

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