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I don't know what to write for my first paragraph watch

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    I want to study aerospace engineering and I have done 80% of my PS. However, I have seen some of the engineering PS examples on TSR and other websites and they all start off really nicely and grabs your attention. I can't really think of anything good to say

    Any advice?

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    Introduce yourself briefly. Give the main reason why you're applying, and explain that (plus your other reasons) in the rest of your PS
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    Please don't introduce yourself. Go straight into why engineering and what interests you about it.
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