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Last edited by Vezuxii; 10-11-2015 at 21:13.
- 28-10-2015 21:15
- 08-11-2015 18:57
Your essay appears to have many mistakes including punctuation mistakes and verb-tense
agreements to name a few. For example, in the first paragraph: Leadership is influencing... the
correct tense would be "Leadership influences.."
The last paragraph should have a full stop between the words "business" and "a" so that..A
more motivated and skilled workforce..becomes a sentence on its own. Those are just a few of
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