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    Hey

    Your essay appears to have many mistakes including punctuation mistakes and verb-tense

    agreements to name a few. For example, in the first paragraph: Leadership is influencing... the

    correct tense would be "Leadership influences.."

    The last paragraph should have a full stop between the words "business" and "a" so that..A

    more motivated and skilled workforce..becomes a sentence on its own. Those are just a few of

    the mistakes.

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