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Can someone please read my personal statement to see if I need to go more in depth or anything else that need to be in there. I will be studying Computing degree. I do know I can't post my personal statement on public forum.

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Can someone please read my personal statement to see if I need to go more in depth or anything else that need to be in there. I will be studying Computing degree. I do know I can't post my personal statement on public forum.

Thanks for the help it would be appreciated
Ask you teachers or family to read it. Don't share it with strangers on the internet.

You have no way of verifying the identity of people on TSR, even with proof that they might be already at university doesn't actually give them any insight into university admissions and the requirements of a PS (and no guarantees that they would be as careful with your PS as you are).

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/per...ake_some_notes has some general guidance on what you should and shouldn't include (and if you follow it through each stage it will give you some automated feedback.

https://www.cs.ox.ac.uk/admissions/u..._to_avoid.html has some useful advice on CS PSs as does http://university.which.co.uk/advice...ience-students
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Ask you teachers or family to read it. Don't share it with strangers on the internet.

You have no way of verifying the identity of people on TSR, even with proof that they might be already at university doesn't actually give them any insight into university admissions and the requirements of a PS (and no guarantees that they would be as careful with your PS as you are).

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/per...ake_some_notes has some general guidance on what you should and shouldn't include (and if you follow it through each stage it will give you some automated feedback.

https://www.cs.ox.ac.uk/admissions/u..._to_avoid.html has some useful advice on CS PSs as does http://university.which.co.uk/advice...ience-students
Thanks for the advice I can't really asked family due to some issues but I can ask my teachers and friends about my personal statement. The website has been really useful and helped me further with my personal statement.

Thanks very much.
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