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    Can anyone help me in describing a desolate New York City please???
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    How do you mean? As in post - apocalyptic, abandoned? The best way to write any descriptive piece of writing is to come up with images, then start developing descriptions based on the initial ideas that you have - make sure to use a variety of words and imagery. Think of ways to describe the scene that cover all 5 senses - touch, taste, smell, sound, sight. Use lots of adjectives to make each thing you describe really detailed and also try to get in some metaphors, similes and other language features
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    There it stood desolate, devastated and damaged. Once a place filled with joy, now a city where the sky scrapers sullenly stare down at the city, piercing into it's soul. Everyone escaped.

    Just an idea, good luck in writing it.
 
 
 
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