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    Thanks for the feedback ---Taken down essay
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    What subject is it? I'm good with English Lit and History...
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    gcse? it depends what the question of the essay is but i'd say its maybe a mid A
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    Shouldn't post on here as can be plagarisy. Looks very good to me for GCSE level
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    tldr; go read the band descriptors in the mark scheme
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    I'd edit sentences used in your analysis. For this:

    (Original post by MozartEd)
    Shakespeare makes Romeo and Juliet's first meeting tremendously effective in various ways using many language devices.
    I'd just say "Shakespeare makes Romeo and Juliet's first meeting tremendously effective using various language devices".

    Just to make it more concise
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    Thanks you and i will change it soon. Also just for the risk of plagiarism i will take it down and it's not for GCSE but an end of topic yr9 assessment. Once again thanks for the feedback.
 
 
 
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