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    "When Manchester United won the the match they rejoiced in victory"

    Im not so sure about using the word rejoiced...?
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    (Original post by HenryKenry)
    "When Manchester United won the the match they rejoiced in victory"

    Im not so sure about using the word rejoiced...?
    i would change it slightly...

    "When Manchester United won the the match they rejoiced in their victory"
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    There's redundancy in that sentence. You don't need to say they won and had a victory.
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    (Original post by the bear)
    i would change it slightly...

    "When Manchester United won the the match they rejoiced in their victory"
    Manchester United is a noun in this sentence, so saying "their" and "they" wouldn't be technically correct (although it is said in common English)
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    (Original post by Student403)
    Manchester United is a noun in this sentence, so saying "their" and "they" wouldn't be technically correct (although it is said in common English)
    hmmm... also "the the" sounds wrong somehow...
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    (Original post by the bear)
    hmmm... also "the the" sounds wrong somehow...
    Maybe.. Just a little bit
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    (Original post by the bear)
    hmmm... also "the the" sounds wrong somehow...
    Wow. Didn't see that at all!
 
 
 
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