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Size:  68.0 KB I did this back last year for an AS Final piece, any advice how I could of got a higher mark?
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    the idea is very striking. the skin tones could be changed; maybe render them as metallic gold & silver ?
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    (Original post by DominiqueNelson)
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Size:  68.0 KB I did this back last year for an AS Final piece, any advice how I could of got a higher mark?
    I'm assuming you want me to be brutally honest.

    Maybe draw something more real with none of that weird stuff on their faces as it distracts from the focus of the picture the women looking into the eyes of the other. Also eyebrows do not generally seem solid blocks when they are up close from a distance maybe but not so close. But this is for 'art'.

    However for the purpose of grade improvement this advice may not be good. You will have to look at your spec and also pester art teachers everywhere.
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    (Original post by Xenon17)
    I'm assuming you want me to be brutally honest.

    Maybe draw something more real with none of that weird stuff on their faces as it distracts from the focus of the picture the women looking into the eyes of the other. Also eyebrows do not generally seem solid blocks when they are up close from a distance maybe but not so close. But this is for 'art'.

    However for the purpose of grade improvement this advice may not be good. You will have to look at your spec and also pester art teachers everywhere.
    Thanks for the advice haha, the things on the faces are marks for cosmetic surgery as I was doing a project on Body image! and yes I do need to improve the eyebrows haha!
 
 
 
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