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    Hello can someone tell me what grade this is right now (I am going to do more) (My aim is an A*) and how i can make what i have now, better.

    Samedi dernier j'ai dû me lever tôt parce que c'était l'anniversaire de mon frère. Il a eu ans treize ans. C'est très ennuyeux parce que il est plus âgée que moi mais je l'adore de toute façon. Nous sommes allés à "Harry Potter World" C'etait passionnant pur moi parce que j'adore Harry Potter. Je savais pur trois mois avant nous allons. alors quand nous sommes arrivés c'était incroyable de voir son visage s'allument avec excitation.
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    Hello can someone tell me what grade this is right now (I am going to do more) (My aim is an A*) and how i can make what i have now, better.

    Samedi dernier j'ai dû me lever tôt parce que c'était l'anniversaire de mon frère. Il a eu ans treize ans. C'est très ennuyeux parce que il est plus âgée que moi mais je l'adore de toute façon. Nous sommes allés à "Harry Potter World" C'etait passionnant pur moi parce que j'adore Harry Potter. Je savais pur trois mois avant nous allons. alors quand nous sommes arrivés c'était incroyable de voir son visage s'allument avec excitation.
    I would say at the moment this is probably an A grade because there are a few errors but good examples of past tense. When you say 'pur' it should be pour and also I'm not sure about the sentence where you say it is boring but love it as I would have thought it should the past but maybe if you can tell me what you mean I'll understand . If you want to add, you could try and add some conditional tenses and the subjunctive. Also, you could try and say other things but j'adore maybe instead 'you are passionate'. With other tenses in other paragraphs (once improved) it should be A* though!
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    (Original post by leopard923)
    I would say at the moment this is probably an A grade because there are a few errors but good examples of past tense. When you say 'pur' it should be pour and also I'm not sure about the sentence where you say it is boring but love it as I would have thought it should the past but maybe if you can tell me what you mean I'll understand . If you want to add, you could try and add some conditional tenses and the subjunctive. Also, you could try and say other things but j'adore maybe instead 'you are passionate'. With other tenses in other paragraphs (once improved) it should be A* though!
    Thank you so much <3 and i meant "its annoying but i love him anyway" and pur was a typo
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    Thank you so much <3 and i meant "its annoying but i love him anyway" and pur was a typo

    Oh ok, I understand now its really good anyways! Your welcome and good luck for the rest of it !
 
 
 
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