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    okay, so my story is going to be based on a schizophrenic teacher that has 2 sides to her- an evil and the bad. She can't control the bad side and kills of her students in brutal ways. She tries to get rid of the spirit by going to a priest and it is had but possible to get rid off, she HAS to get rid of the spirit as she is everywhere..

    What can I improve about this brief summary of this trailer?
    Is it ok to say she's schizophrenic or should i suggest another illness?

    THANK YOU!
 
 
 
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