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Anyone up for reading my slightly farcical sci-fi novella? watch

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    Hey there! First things first, it's not done yet. Technically, I haven't even reached the end of act 1. To provide some kind of synopsis, it's a story about homeopathy (the assumption is that it's true (that would be the fiction part in the genre's name)), it's a story about friendship, it's a story about obsession, and it's a discussion about how far we can (should?) go in science. Unfortunately, I haven't covered a lot of ground. Of course, you can just read it and (hopefully) enjoy it, but if possible, it'd be great if someone could also point out the rubbish bits, the confusing bits (I'm not a native speaker, sometimes I don't know what I'm talking about), logic problems, and etc. I also have slight punctuation issues...

    Thanks!
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    i enjoyed reading your novella. as a scientist it was a delight to see plenty of hardcore scientific references in there.

    maybe change the name Kolyvagin to something less gynaecological ?
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    (Original post by the bear)
    i enjoyed reading your novella. as a scientist it was a delight to see plenty of hardcore scientific references in there.

    maybe change the name Kolyvagin to something less gynaecological ?
    Thanks a lot! I really appreciate that I'm also delighted to hear that someone got my references. I think I can safely assume that you're part of my target audience then (STEM students). Kolyvagin is supposed to be Колывагин. It sounds less... lewd... in Russian. However, I'll definitely think about renaming him.
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    If you don't mind, I do have one question though. Do you think that Ibrahim's uh... (not trying to spoil it here for others) ailment is a bit cliche?
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    (Original post by Sinfire)
    If you don't mind, I do have one question though. Do you think that Ibrahim's uh... (not trying to spoil it here for others) ailment is a bit cliche?
    i did not find it a problem...
 
 
 
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