English Lang & Lit A2 TransformationWatch
So basically I've just done a transformation but my Teacher said it would only get me a Band 4 so has told me to write something else. I have used the History Boys as my base text and am now doing letters from some of the boys after 10 years of Hectors death. I'm just wondering if anyone could offer any advice for this, whether it being for the letter genre, or for characterization, anything would help really. If someone could read the letters and offer improvement advice I would be so grateful, because I have ultimate writers block at the moment. Message me if you would be able to do this, I would love you forever!
I'm going to quote in Tank Girl now so she can move your thread to the right place if it's needed.