Annabelleleconte
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I would really appreciate if someone would please check what I have written for part of my French speaking assessment on 'holidays'. I have to do a presentation (which my teacher has checked) but she cannot help me anymore- can someone please look over the answers to questions I have to say? Any improvements would be much appreciated as well.

Pendant les vacancies qu'est-ce que tu aimes faire quand il fait beau/mauvais?
Quand il fait beau j'aime faire les magasins avec ma soeur ou ma mère. Ca dépend de où nous allons en vacance. Mon père et moi aimons jouer les jeux de société s'il avait fait mauvais, et (a few years ago?) nous avons joué tout la journée! Aussi, quand il fait beau, j'adore aller a la plage avec mes amis. C'est génial!

Preferes tu partir en vacances avec tes amis ou ta famille?
je préfère partir en vacances avec mes amis parce que c'est plus amusant. Les vacances avec ma famille sont vraiment (stressful?) parce que ma soeur et moi disputons souvent!

est tu deja allee en >PLACE<?
Non, mais je voudrais visiter bientôt car les monuments sont magnifique!

as tu deja mange un plat typiquement francais?
oui, j'ai gouté la specialite de la région l'annee dernière at j'ai trouvé ça degoutant! Aussi, j'ai mangé de la fromage français et c'était magnifique!

Si tu avais beaucoup d'argent, ou voudrais tu aller?
si j;avais beaucoup d'argent, j'irais en Australie pour trois semaines. Je resterais dans un hôtel cher et je voyagerais dans la classe affairs! (not finished)

this isnt all of it, but if someone french is willing to help I can try to offer help in other ways. it would be much appreciated.
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I'm not amazing at French but I do it at A2.

when you said you and your sister argue, disputons is a reflexive verb so it would be: ma sœur et moi, nous nous disputons.

stressful = stressants

Maybe just make your sentences more interesting, in the course book there should be phrases to help you. Try not to use words such as génial and magnifique too much.

Also in the first paragraph, you would say j'aime faire du shopping aux magasins.

Are you doing AS?
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I'm currently at GCSE, thank you so much! Are there any spelling or grammar errors that I have made? Also, is it too much to ask for you to look over the rest of what I have written? This is only part of my speaking but it has helped me a lot, thank you.
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