just use subjunctives and don't ramble when explaining, justify and compare things, when describing your accommodation try to use different adjectives instead of the really basic ones, possibly look into some sort of Spanish thesaurus or such, avoid using basic adjectives you get me. But I would deffo just add subjunctives, just learn how to do/use them or learn a couple of phrases which you could add in which is relative to your topic (obviously tf). you're clearly using different tenses, but just try to get as many conjugated verbs in there as possible and maybe you could mention, instead of using first person singular constantly, maybe describe what your friend or parent wants to go or summat or to stay. Especially for you accommodation one, instead of just describing, you could say what you would prefer as well, or what one of your parents would prefer, you could compare it to one you'd previously stayed at and what the good and bad things are.
hope that's helpful looool
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