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Hi!

My name is Abi Eskriett and I really like poetry. I write a lot of poetry and I would like people to give me feedback about this poem I've written. Its called 'The Bench in the Woods':

The bench in the woods that saw everything,
Life beginning and life ending,
The bench in the woods that heard everything,
From birds tweeting and singing their joyful song.

The bench wasn’t always there in the woods,
He had stood tall and strong,
Amongst all his fellow trees all year round for many years,
During autumn his leaves rustled then fell past his knees.

Then came the time when his life ended,
Bent double in agony as the axe struck through him,
And he soon began life again as a bench,
The bench in the woods that saw everything.


I hope you like it. Comment what you think please.
Thanks x
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