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    Hello all, I just made a video about chickenpox, check it out if you have time and let me know what you think . I hope you have a great day!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jf0x16seGfw
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    (Original post by Jemil Ene)
    Hello all, I just made a video about chickenpox, check it out if you have time and let me know what you think . I hope you have a great day!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jf0x16seGfw
    What is the purpose of this video? Are you trying to simply be a channel that educates others? Is this for some university project?
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    (Original post by RMNDK)
    What is the purpose of this video? Are you trying to simply be a channel that educates others? Is this for some university project?
    Hello, yeah I just want to be a channel that educates people, by presenting medicine and the human body in a way the general public can be interested in. I have noticed tons of science, maths and even history videos on YouTube but there were not too many about medicine and the human body that were not overly complicated.
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    it could go viral

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    (Original post by the bear)
    it could go viral

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    Haha Thanks XD
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    (Original post by Jemil Ene)
    Hello, yeah I just want to be a channel that educates people, by presenting medicine and the human body in a way the general public can be interested in. I have noticed tons of science, maths and even history videos on YouTube but there were not too many about medicine and the human body that were not overly complicated.
    I see.
    Well you're doing a really good job at it!
    I've checked your other videos and you've all got that idea of conveying the topic of the video across in a succinct manner. Not too much detail, but enough to provoke further intellectual curiosity.
    I've always loved the whiteboard style videos so that's good.

    There's only one criticism I'll make and that is that (well at least for me) you talk a little bit too fast. That might be offputting cos even though you're not using OTT language it might come across as if it's complicated.

    Keep it up though, it's a great channel.
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    (Original post by RMNDK)
    I see.
    Well you're doing a really good job at it!
    I've checked your other videos and you've all got that idea of conveying the topic of the video across in a succinct manner. Not too much detail, but enough to provoke further intellectual curiosity.
    I've always loved the whiteboard style videos so that's good.

    There's only one criticism I'll make and that is that (well at least for me) you talk a little bit too fast. That might be offputting cos even though you're not using OTT language it might come across as if it's complicated.

    Keep it up though, it's a great channel.
    AH thank you very much for your feedback ! Its really hard to balance the amount of detail to put in and keep it short, ah thanks I will work on speaking a bit slower and release a video every week to try and improve, if you like them then please subscribe I would appreciate it .
 
 
 
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