how could I improve this introduction, it's a letter to Katie Hopkins.
I recently read your article on the daily mail with quite a surprise. I could understand where your points were coming from e.g. older names, means smarter parents. I could understand because you are a mother doing your best for your children however, this doesn't give you the right to criticise others. I am not a mother, yet I see countless mothers allowing children to mingle with children of different races, class and colour. This is why I am disgusted with your opinions- such as how you think you are the right person to judge who your children become friends with. Opinions like this and how you act upon them make me wonder how badly this has affected your children's social life. As a result, you should seriously consider how you actions affect people around you. Wouldn't you like your children to live in a world without judgement?
Loughborough at number one