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    Hi,

    When you are writing about what a character did in a text, how can you talk about them without making them sound like a real character?
    For example, how would I say, "Chris Keller and George Deever both were involved in the war..."?

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    (Original post by musicangel)
    Hi,

    When you are writing about what a character did in a text, how can you talk about them without making them sound like a real character?
    For example, how would I say, "Chris Keller and George Deever both were involved in the war..."?

    Thanks
    If you put 'in the text...' in front of them it sounds better, or 'at this point in the narrative', or 'the author (use their name) used the fact that... to show...'
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    (Original post by Gingerbread101)
    If you put 'in the text...' in front of them it sounds better, or 'at this point in the narrative', or 'the author (use their name) used the fact that... to show...'
    Thank you so much for your help!
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    Or the author has used the character, (insert name), to show that ... this is effective because....

    Works really well.
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    (Original post by YellowMood)
    Or the author has used the character, (insert name), to show that ... this is effective because....

    Works really well.
    Thank you for your advice!
 
 
 
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