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    Hi, i was wondering if this makes sense as I am writing a Spanish control assessment and I'm not very good at the language. Thanks.

    Mi madre desea que era un salón en lugar de un spa porque ella tiene gusto de conseguir su pelo teñido de un montón.

    If it doesn't please can you help make it better/correct it?
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    (Original post by Harriet828)
    Hi, i was wondering if this makes sense as I am writing a Spanish control assessment and I'm not very good at the language. Thanks.

    Mi madre desea que fuera una peluquería en lugar de un spa porque a ella le gusta teñirse el pelo un montón

    If it doesn't please can you help make it better/correct it?
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    (Original post by Plantagenet Crown)
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    Thanks!
 
 
 
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