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    I need help on how to get an A* or A in my controlled assessment. My controlled assessment is about the women and how their status changed and i need help on how to structure my paragraph and how to get that A*. Can anyone plz help me? My exam board is AQA. Are there any websites that help you with controlled assessment or that could help me with my question?
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    I need help on how to get an A* or A in my controlled assessment. My controlled assessment is about the women and how their status changed and i need help on how to structure my paragraph and how to get that A*. Can anyone plz help me? My exam board is AQA. Are there any websites that help you with controlled assessment or that could help me with my question?
    Hey leeza_123.

    What period and country are you focusing on? This could help me find some sources for your controlled assessment.

    As for your paragraph structure keep it PEE(E)L for every paragraph.
    Point: State the main focus of your paragraph.
    Explain: Expand on your point.
    Example: Give an example to prove your point.
    (Expand: If you feel the example needs explanation, go ahead.)
    Link: Link back to question and write something you can link to the next paragraph too.
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    Ok thanks. My topic is the changing role and status of women since 1900. My question is explain how useful were the sources into the impact of the two world wars on the status of women. We have 2 questions and the first one is out of 16 and I really want to get an A* in the controlled assessment. We haven't done the second question yet so I don't know that. Could you plz help me get really good marks and an A* or even an A.
 
 
 

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