Hey there! Sign in to join this conversationNew here? Join for free
    Offline

    12
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by ohitsesther_)
    Who did conflict in AIC ?
    I did that question, I wrote about conflict between social classes (ie the strike eva was involved in), how they need to change to prevent war (or more conflict) and conflict within families. I linked them together in my conclusion. My essay was a bit rambly and I probably should have done families first and built it up, because it was a bit anti climatic placed after the one about war, but I think it was mostly okay because I talked a lot about Priestley's message and offered alternative interpretations as well as trying to analyse language.
    Offline

    10
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by Marcuspdown)
    Was the first question on the Crucible to analyse the role of TWO women or one?
    The question said to choose 2 for the basis of your answer, but i think it was to analyse women as a whole group of people so I'm scared incase I messed it up!!
    Offline

    16
    ReputationRep:
    How many paragraphs was you meant to write for each question?
    Offline

    3
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by charlievanest)
    I thought the OMAM passage was awful, really wanted it to about a character
    same, there were some points in the essay that i found but i didnt necessarily know how to develop it into a good answer...tbh it wasnt the BEST passage for analysis
    Offline

    7
    ReputationRep:
    Did LOTF + TKAM

    Thanks for the free marks AQA
    Offline

    2
    ReputationRep:
    The short stories questions were beautiful. The only one I'd revised, Polish Teacher's Tie, was on the paper. Hell yes
    Offline

    4
    ReputationRep:
    I found it ok...

    Not sure if I really answered the question for the Gerald and Sheila question - I mainly just talked about the foreshadowing in the first scene oops

    Loved the passage, didn't have much time for the (b) part for OMAM (literally wrote about half a page)
    Offline

    2
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by ohitsesther_)
    Who did conflict in AIC ?
    I did question 18 so conflict in AIC, i found this one so good as i did this for my coursework but only realised it after the exam. there was so much you could talk about for Q18 including Gerald and Sheila which is what they gave for Q17.
    for Q18 i talked about socialism vs capitalism represented by the inspector and Mr Birling. then i talked about social class divide shown by eva vs mr and mrs Birling, i dont know if ive done enough to get over 28/34. im aiming for 26.
    Offline

    3
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by libertygrace)
    Who did question 17 for aic about Gerald and Sheila's relationship changing throughout the play? (AQA)
    Meee! I don't think I did that well as I went off topic and didn't really answer the question :// what points did you make??
    Offline

    10
    ReputationRep:
    For the Crucible, I only wrote about how Miller presented two of the women (Elizabeth and Abigail), and I'm so scared incase I completely messed it up Of Mice and Men wasn't too bad, although I dont think i wrote enough for part b
    Offline

    0
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by gcselyfe)
    i wrote about capitalism vs socialism, morality and responsibility but wrote it really badly
    forgot all about capitalism vs socialism
    Offline

    3
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by Char4ncubex)
    I did question 18 so conflict in AIC, i found this one so good as i did this for my coursework but only realised it after the exam. there was so much you could talk about for Q18 including Gerald and Sheila which is what they gave for Q17.
    for Q18 i talked about socialism vs capitalism represented by the inspector and Mr Birling. then i talked about social class divide shown by eva vs mr and mrs Birling, i dont know if ive done enough to get over 28/34. im aiming for 26.
    how many paras did u write? Because I wrote 2 long paras which included a point for each and then i brought 2-3 evidences for each and explained them? idk....
    i only wrote 6 sides in total for the whole exam...i feel like that isnt enough
    Offline

    9
    ReputationRep:
    What were the questions for The Woman in Black and Of Mice and Men? My brother sat this paper today. THANKS!!
    Offline

    12
    ReputationRep:
    That was ok?

    Chose Sheila and Gerald for AIC and did TKAM - the AIC questions were reasonable I thought, and the TKAM passage was good (although the part b was very broad). Only wrote 5 sides in total!
    Offline

    12
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by grace143)
    Meee! I don't think I did that well as I went off topic and didn't really answer the question :// what points did you make??
    I said their relationship at the start is happy but with underlying tension, talked about when it starts to break down ("You've been put through it - now you want to see someone else put through it") and then at the end when she refuses the ring.
    Offline

    7
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by 11ahf)
    IM SO HAPPY THOSE QUESTIONS WERE SO GOOD💗

    (I loved WIB and OMAM)
    WIB!!! Godsend.
    Offline

    10
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by MeganMcAlister)
    The question said to choose 2 for the basis of your answer, but i think it was to analyse women as a whole group of people so I'm scared incase I messed it up!!
    OMG i thought i was the only one what i did was how they both use religion although differently . Rebecca and abigail That was the main thing i compared and i also refrence the fact on John and how saw the girls as jangling the keys of the kingdom where abigail was the leader having a negative influence on proctor and salem whereas Rebecca had a positive influence and found the shred of goodness in him.
    Offline

    2
    ReputationRep:
    If anyone wants Mr Bruff's A* videos (private YouTube links), PM me


    Posted from TSR Mobile
    Offline

    3
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by emmald583)
    I said their relationship at the start is happy but with underlying tension, talked about when it starts to break down ("You've been put through it - now you want to see someone else put through it" and then at the end when she refuses the ring.
    Yeah I made the exact same points but I didn't use that quote you used, I used one where Gerald is patronising Sheila "it's been a long exciting tiring day", which isn't really showing how their relationship changed
    Offline

    10
    ReputationRep:
    (Original post by AKDbbb)
    OMG i thought i was the only one what i did was how they both use religion although differently . Rebecca and abigail That was the main thing i compared and i also refrence the fact on John and how saw the girls as jangling the keys of the kingdom where abigail was the leader having a negative influence on proctor and salem whereas Rebecca had a positive influence and found the shred of goodness in him.
    You'll be fine! I only focused on Abigail and Elizabeth so I'm not sure if I answered it correctly
 
 
 
  • See more of what you like on The Student Room

    You can personalise what you see on TSR. Tell us a little about yourself to get started.

  • Poll
    Have you ever participated in a Secret Santa?
    Useful resources

    Make your revision easier

    OMAM

    Ultimate Of Mice And Men Thread

    Plot, context, character analysis and everything in between.

    Notes

    Revision Hub

    All our revision materials in one place

    Love books

    Common grammar and vocabulary problems

    Get your questions asked and answered

    Useful literary websitesStudy help rules and posting guidelines

    Groups associated with this forum:

    View associated groups
  • See more of what you like on The Student Room

    You can personalise what you see on TSR. Tell us a little about yourself to get started.

  • The Student Room, Get Revising and Marked by Teachers are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd.

    Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. 806 8067 22 Registered Office: International House, Queens Road, Brighton, BN1 3XE

    Quick reply
    Reputation gems: You get these gems as you gain rep from other members for making good contributions and giving helpful advice.