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    (Original post by Ishea16)
    it was good
    but i think youve gone into too much detail at some parts
    its about showing not telling them and you want to save that for the interview as well
    also the start needs to be a bit more original
    everyone is going to start like that and you need to shine against everyone else

    but it was seriously good
    you sound like a good student so im sure you'll be fine
    good luck
    Thank you! How would you suggest I start it?
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    Yeah.. No interviews here. Lol

    Not to generalise, but in my opinion the people who win "popularity contests" don't exactly make good role models at my school
    Or even later on in their lives :lol:

    Only some 'popular' individuals actually turn out to be genuinely nice, but that's still rare
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    Go for it james, a fellow PwC applicant!

    I was head boy in year 11 so you know
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    (Original post by The Genghis Khan)
    Go for it james, a fellow PwC applicant!

    I was head boy in year 11 so you know
    I'll send it to you now!

    By the way the interview went okayish, no idea if it was enough though...
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    (Original post by Lovinlife2)
    Or even later on in their lives :lol:

    Only some 'popular' individuals actually turn out to be genuinely nice, but that's still rare
    Agreed :emo:
 
 
 
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