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    it needs music to it but i dont have that skill, just imagine slightly dour violin music please.

    ballad of the last man

    (Male voice)
    I am alone now dear
    Without you
    The service was beautiful
    A private affair
    If only you'd been there

    I am alone now dear
    I stood still
    In the town today,
    so loud and full of life
    I saw you there

    I missed you today my dear
    My heart stilled
    As the world passed on by
    They saw nothing of you
    As you laid there

    I'm so tired now dear
    This body ache
    I dream of peace my dear
    And seeing you again
    If only I was there

    I have found a friend my dear
    Who stilled my hand
    She gives me peace again
    And hope and life
    If only you could meet her

    The world screams my dear
    Moans in pain
    It is full of aches and sickness
    Just as you were
    I'm glad you're not here

    The world is still my dear
    Cold and quiet
    The life has fled from it
    And I am alone
    I feel you with me here

    Life is hard my dear
    I scavenge what I can
    There is little left to gather here
    I must move on
    But I will return to you here

    I am old now my dear
    This life is fading
    This world will soon be free of me
    And all will then be still
    I will lay down to sleep here with you.

    (Female voice)
    Your life has ended now my dear
    This case of anno domini
    I can hold you in my arms again
    After all these years
    You are finally with me here.
 
 
 
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