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I'd really appreciate if any of you fine fellows could give me feedback on my History essay.
I'm doing AS OCR History, The Early Stuarts and the English Revolution 1603-60. The essay question was 'How far were the actions of Charles I the main reason for the outbreak of civil war in England in 1642?'
Thanks very much!
I'm doing AS OCR History, The Early Stuarts and the English Revolution 1603-60. The essay question was 'How far were the actions of Charles I the main reason for the outbreak of civil war in England in 1642?'
Thanks very much!
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The essay is good and I didn't have time to go over all the paragraphs! However, you only need about 4 paragraphs! You don't need this many and it will save you more time in the exam. In History I always thought it was 2 points against and 2 points for. But, I have a History tutor who helps me with essay technique and planning and it's better to build up to your argument but of course consider both viewpoints.. I hope this helps! Feel free to message me we could help each other out for revision!
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(Original post by Abstract_Prism)
I'd really appreciate if any of you fine fellows could give me feedback on my History essay.
I'm doing AS OCR History, The Early Stuarts and the English Revolution 1603-60. The essay question was 'How far were the actions of Charles I the main reason for the outbreak of civil war in England in 1642?'
Thanks very much!
I'd really appreciate if any of you fine fellows could give me feedback on my History essay.
I'm doing AS OCR History, The Early Stuarts and the English Revolution 1603-60. The essay question was 'How far were the actions of Charles I the main reason for the outbreak of civil war in England in 1642?'
Thanks very much!
http://www.thetutorpages.com/tutor-a...-planning/7537
http://www.thetutorpages.com/tutor-a...-an-essay/3308
http://www.thetutorpages.com/tutor-a...roduction/4160
And here's a blog post that brings together some of the main tips:
http://www.thetutorpages.com/blog/si...essay-writing/
Good luck!
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