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    Hi, I was wondering if you could help me and give me a few tips on how you could improve this poem. Thank you.
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    Loose should be lose*
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    (Original post by IDontKnowReally)
    Loose should be lose*
    How do you mean???????
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    Wow this is really good!
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    Apart from a few spelling mistakes i'd say its pretty great.
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    (Original post by DanielJames)
    Apart from a few spelling mistakes i'd say its pretty great.
    Thank you, is there any way that i could improve it?
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    (Original post by cilla_e)
    Wow this is really good!
    Thank you, is there any way that i could improve it?
 
 
 
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