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poem to my physics teacher

i want to write my physics teacher a poem in english abut i am not that great in expressing myself in poems!! i need your help!!
i would like my poem to :

[*]rhyme
[*]express my gratitude to this physics teacher(he gave me afterschool classes withought taking money from me beacause i couldnt fit physics into my schedule!!)
[*]tell him that i will never forget him....
[*]and that he's my favourite....

i know there are many of u out there who r very fluent in english and are brillient in poem writing so please help me out!!
Reply 1
Can't you just buy him some booze?
Reply 2
Can he speak English then!?
'A Valediction: broken circuits'

The series of our terms has reached its end,
But what its sum shall be who yet can say?
For evenings in the lab, we forsook our p(l)ay,
And extracted the roots of knowledge. Now we rend

That circuit, flowing, flown, 'twixt our souls. Farewell.
Yet, like bulbs, the school's soft stars, your soul and mine,
Shall be: the one extinguish'd, the other shines;
Your mind, my heart, are wir'd in parallel.

This is so much more fun than trying to pass my finals.
Reply 4
Da Bachtopus
'A Valediction: broken circuits'

The series of our terms has reached its end,
But what its sum shall be who yet can say?
For evenings in the lab, we forsook our p(l)ay,
And extracted the roots of knowledge. Now we rend

That circuit, flowing, flown, 'twixt our souls. Farewell.
Yet, like bulbs, the school's soft stars, your soul and mine,
Shall be: the one extinguish'd, the other shines;
Your mind, my heart, are wir'd in parallel.


Yeh, or that. ^^
Reply 5
Da Bachtopus
'A Valediction: broken circuits'

The series of our terms has reached its end,
But what its sum shall be who yet can say?
For evenings in the lab, we forsook our p(l)ay,
And extracted the roots of knowledge. Now we rend

That circuit, flowing, flown, 'twixt our souls. Farewell.
Yet, like bulbs, the school's soft stars, your soul and mine,
Shall be: the one extinguish'd, the other shines;
Your mind, my heart, are wir'd in parallel.

Goodness me.
Reply 6
Sounds a bit weird writing a poem to a teacher.....
And if you gave him the poem that was suggested on here then i think he may have to report you for inappropriate behaviour or sexual harrassment!! It's a little over the top! Plus a poem is rather personal, i think its extremely weird to want to give one to a teacher no matter how helpful he was.. do you have a crush on him?
Kidders
if you gave him the poem that was suggested on here then i think he may have to report you for inappropriate behaviour or sexual harrassment!!


Witless much?
Reply 8
What does that mean?
Reply 9
Kidders
do you have a crush on him?

i was gonna ask that,lol it does seem a bit weird writing a poem to a teacher. But i did like Da Bachtopus's poem, especially the last line :laugh:
Reply 10
Kidders
What does that mean?

It means he thinks you are without wits, you do not possess wits.
Reply 11
Ywiss
It means he thinks you are without wits, you do not possess wits.


Ah i see.. well i'm not too fussed what said member thinks of my wit! I was just commenting on what was posted and in my opinion i felt it would be a little inappropriate to send the poem written, even though it was a very well written poem. That is all.
Kidders
Sounds a bit weird writing a poem to a teacher.....
And if you gave him the poem that was suggested on here then i think he may have to report you for inappropriate behaviour or sexual harrassment!! It's a little over the top! Plus a poem is rather personal, i think its extremely weird to want to give one to a teacher no matter how helpful he was.. do you have a crush on him?

More likely for the outrageous bout of punning than sexual harrassment!
Reply 13
hahaha its soo fun reading all ur comments hahhahaha
lol noooooooooo i dont have a crush .....heheh that would bee funny and weird!! i want to give him a present which is basically some Classic Plaque and the poem would be written on it..........i had no other idea but any other ideas are welcomed!!!
and oh incase ur wonderign WHY i am getting him a gift anyway, he is THE BEST TEACHER EVER he helped me alot.....i couldnt have fitted physics A2 into my schedule without him Sacrificing his own FREETIME and without chargin me anymoney....he could have asked me to get him after school as a private tutor but he didnt....beacasue he is soo nice, he is not materialisitc !!

so keep teh poems going and any otehr ideas plz plz
thank u aloot