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Im entering for a competition but need help with my poem
Compliment me
Make me smile
I crave attention
The hunger burns from the pit of my stomach
My soul bursting with life

Your very words pierced the depths of my heart
Hopeful and hopeless all at the same time
Your future unclear to yourself and to me
You just wanted someone to numb the pain
And i just wanted to play a game
I am alone
Alone in this world
Abandoned
I have no mother or father
A beating heart and a soul
Is what i do have
It Keeps me going
For that’s all the world has to offer me.
IT NEEDS A LOT OF EDITING IM THINKING OF A MISUNDERSTOOD PERSON PRESENTED AS A MOUNTAIN WHEN REALLY SHE IS A VOLCANO BURSTING WITH LIFE?
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