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    Im entering for a competition but need help with my poem
    Compliment me
    Make me smile
    I crave attention
    The hunger burns from the pit of my stomach
    My soul bursting with life

    Your very words pierced the depths of my heart
    Hopeful and hopeless all at the same time
    Your future unclear to yourself and to me
    You just wanted someone to numb the pain
    And i just wanted to play a game
    I am alone
    Alone in this world
    Abandoned
    I have no mother or father
    A beating heart and a soul
    Is what i do have
    It Keeps me going
    For that’s all the world has to offer me.
    IT NEEDS A LOT OF EDITING IM THINKING OF A MISUNDERSTOOD PERSON PRESENTED AS A MOUNTAIN WHEN REALLY SHE IS A VOLCANO BURSTING WITH LIFE?
 
 
 

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