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    In regards to yesterday’s conversation, I took into consideration that it would be better if I continued to attend the school term 2016/2017 in Prime School, due to the fact that it would be more convenient in transportation arrangements. This is because, according to my research, other schools that follow the same British curriculum as Prime School (A levels) are only located in Algarve.
    I’m still not fully inclined into the option of studying abroad because I’ve found certain universities in Portugal that are suitable for the courses that I’m willing to undertake.
    In account to my grades, it would be more beneficial to have tuition classes on subjects which I’m currently facing with more difficulty
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    (Original post by shneebnee)
    In regards to yesterday’s conversation, I took into consideration that it would be better if I continued to attend the school term 2016/2017 in Prime School, due to the fact that it would be more convenient in transportation arrangements. This is because, according to my research, other schools that follow the same British curriculum as Prime School (A levels) are only located in Algarve.
    I’m still not fully inclined into the option of studying abroad because I’ve found certain universities in Portugal that are suitable for the courses that I’m willing to undertake.
    In account to my grades, it would be more beneficial to have tuition classes on subjects which I’m currently facing with more difficulty
    In regards to yesterday’s conversation, after lengthy consideration, I have decided that it would be better if I continue to attend Prime School for the 2016/17 school year, due to the fact that it would be more convenient in terms of transport.
    This is because, according to my research, other schools that follow the same British curriculum as Prime School (A levels) are only located in the Algarve.
    I’m still unsure about the option of studying abroad, due to the fact that I’ve found certain universities in Portugal that are suitable for the courses that I’m willing to undertake.
    Taking my grades into account, it would be more beneficial to have tuition on the subjects which I find most challenging.
 
 
 
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