As Geography Meander Formation (6 marks)Watch
Would you say this is a full description of a meanders formation ??
Middle coarse -> middle course
And are sinuous bend -> and are A sinuous bend
the load has become fine the river has a surplus -> needs a comma between "fine" and "the"
Straight channels... -> straight river channels.../straight channels in the river...
Forming: Pools are the -> I see what you're going for here, but don't just go straight into it, say "Pools, which are the"
"Are more efficient are" -> are more efficient at
The rest of it has a few errors too, that's just the first four lines. I don't know if there's marks for SPAG anymore, but you will lose marks if the examiner says they can't read it or it doesn't flow well. You'd probably get 4/6, maybe a 5, on this. But other than that, it's good. Just make sure you reread your work.
FYI if you're dyslexic, obviously you can ignore all of this as they'll probably take that into consideration.