Can anybody please help me with this descriptive writing piece?

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Hello! So i have to write a descriptive writing piece of Coursework and require some help. In this piece you have a choice of describing any scene that you desire but it has to be 800 words long. I had an idea of describing Fireworks but i don't now how i should structure this piece. I want to describe the Fireworks in the middle of the piece. Does anybody have ideas on what i could write about at the start of the piece and the end? If annybody has any other ideas for scenes to describe then let me know. Finally, has anybody done a descriptive piece and is willing to share it with me? I am looking for ideas so i can try to produce something creative. I am aiming for an A/A* grade to match my two other pieces of coursework.
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How about describing a scene at your canteen? imagine your walking through..and the scene is negative (horrific). There could be fights going on (food fights, people getting hurt), there could be mess everywhere etc...
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(Original post by sulaimanali)
How about describing a scene at your canteen? imagine your walking through..and the scene is negative (horrific). There could be fights going on (food fights, people getting hurt), there could be mess everywhere etc...
Well i ideally want to describe something positive rather than negative. So it may be an option but i am looking for other ideas.
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How about describing Heaven?
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Or a scene at an amusement park?
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Thanks for the ideas
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Anybody else willing to help?
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Welcome..
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