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    Im doing a Fiction Writing Test in school and i need help we are writing about When you are Lonely or When you were Scared!!(

    Im not a good writer i dont use powerful vocabulary(
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    (Original post by mayu123)
    Im doing a Fiction Writing Test in school and i need help we are writing about When you are Lonely or When you were Scared!!(

    Im not a good writer i dont use powerful vocabulary(
    I'll help!
    First of all, how much do you read? If you read a lot then you just need to do a bit of planning. However, if you don't read much I'm afraid you're going to find the task hard.
    Pick your story! (When you are lonely or when you are scared)
    If I were you I would pick when you are scared, there's a lot more to write about and you can generally make the story more exciting with a happy ending. You will have to use these as a success criteria:
    - Lots of descriptions, use similies
    - Lots of action
    - Make it very realistic (makes it scarier)

    If you choose the lonely you are looking at a story like this:
    - Lots of thoughts
    - A story from the past
    - Link the story to the present i.e what is happening now
    - Emotional story (can you make someone cry if they read it)

    Hope this helps! Remember to plan your story in detail first.
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    I'll help!
    First of all, how much do you read? If you read a lot then you just need to do a bit of planning. However, if you don't read much I'm afraid you're going to find the task hard.
    Pick your story! (When you are lonely or when you are scared)
    If I were you I would pick when you are scared, there's a lot more to write about and you can generally make the story more exciting with a happy ending. You will have to use these as a success criteria:
    - Lots of descriptions, use similies
    - Lots of action
    - Make it very realistic (makes it scarier)

    If you choose the lonely you are looking at a story like this:
    - Lots of thoughts
    - A story from the past
    - Link the story to the present i.e what is happening now
    - Emotional story (can you make someone cry if they read it)

    Hope this helps! Remember to plan your story in detail first.
    how to you make the examiner really scared in the first paragraph is it okay if you post a really scary paragraph if possible and thanks for the information? ::::::::::
 
 
 
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