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    Grey wet concrete
    and rain.
    Boots, an arrow,
    a man you made tame.
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    (Original post by The_Last_Melon)
    Grey wet concrete
    and rain.
    Boots, an arrow,
    a man you made tame.
    A bit short but good!
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    This poem concerns an incident where the woman I hoped to marry first said to me "You're awesome". Which I still remember and think of to this day.

    I didn't marry her, she actually married someone else. But I still have this nice memory of supposed awesomeness to keep me going in life, from someone I previously loved.

    My next poem may be an 'Ode to a Donut' because I'm considering going on a strict diet.
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    (Original post by The_Last_Melon)
    This poem concerns an incident where the woman I hoped to marry first said to me "You're awesome". Which I still remember and think of to this day.

    I didn't marry her, she actually married someone else. But I still have this nice memory of supposed awesomeness to keep me going in life, from someone I previously loved.

    My next poem may be an 'Ode to a Donut' because I'm considering going on a strict diet.
    :cookie:

    shud be gud
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    (Original post by The_Last_Melon)
    My next poem may be an 'Ode to a Donut' because I'm considering going on a strict diet.
    Maybe it should be an elegy: a lament for lost or uneaten donuts.

    I'm welling up at the thought.
 
 
 
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