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Hi this is my first time posting here, but can somebody proofread my homework?
It is about a terrible holiday experience that I have had recently.

L’hôtel désastre L’année dernière, je suis allée à la campagne avec mes amis. Nous avons logédans un gire prés de Truro. Je voulais visiter le parc d’attractions. Maisc’était trop cher. En plus, il n’y avait pas une salle de bain à l’intérieur dela maison, donc nous nous lavions dans le lac. C’était horrible. Ma chambre étaittrès sombre, et je ne pouvais pas dormir. Il n’y avait ni télévision ni wifi. Donc,je voulais faire du VTT, mais mon vélo ne marchait pas parce que c’était cassé.J’étais très triste. À mon retour, je suis allée en train car j’ai pensé que c’étaitmoins cher, mais c’était vraiment cher j’ai payé environ £50 pour mon billet. J’étaisfâchée.

I have used word reference and a french dictionary

many thanks.

p.s this isn't for controlled assessment or anything. Just homework from what we learned in lessons.
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(Original post by CycloneZord)
Hi this is my first time posting here, but can somebody proofread my homework?
It is about a terrible holiday experience that I have had recently.

L’hôtel désastre L’année dernière, je suis allée à la campagne avec mes amis. Nous avons logé dans un gite prés de Truro. Je voulais visiter le parc d’attractions. Mais c’était trop cher. En plus, il n’y avait pas une salle de bain à l’intérieur de la maison, donc nous nous lavions dans le lac. C’était horrible. Ma chambre était très sombre, et je ne pouvais pas dormir. Il n’y avait ni télévision ni wifi. Donc,je voulais faire du VTT, mais mon vélo ne marchait pas parce que c’était cassé. J’étais très triste. À mon retour, je suis allée en train car j’ai pensé que c’était moins cher, mais c’était vraiment cher j’ai payé environ £50 pour mon billet. J’étais fâchée.

I have used word reference and a french dictionary

many thanks.

p.s this isn't for controlled assessment or anything. Just homework from what we learned in lessons.
The accent's the wrong way on pret, but otherwise spot on!
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Great, thanks!


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Great, thanks!


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Not at the minute, but I did get an A so thanks.


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