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Head Boy application watch

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    Hi I have been elected a prefect and in order to apply for head boy you have to produce a 800 word piece on why you want to be prefect and what makes you suitable. I think they are deliberately vague and offer no other help in order to add an extra dimension to the process.

    I am sorted with the main body of the text but i'm not sure If my open sentence is suitable and does't make sound like a arse.

    Any help would be greatly appreciated.

    (Original post by Astrtricks)
    I hope for others to admire me as I have taken example of others"
    I wouldn't use the phrase, 'admire me' as it would seem like you're wanting attention; it may be better to say you wish to be a role model for other students.

    lol dont be a ******* prefect. they get beat up
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