Need help with Personal Statement
I'm kinda stuck with my personal statement.
I have a barebones statement, but I have no idea how to elaborate on what I am mentioning. Talking about Rampaging Chariots, and my academic interests (photovoltaics, superconductors and materials). I'm applying for Mechanical Engineering mostly, materials where possible, if that helps
Any and all help is greatly appreciated.
EDIT: And when is talking about super- and extra-curricular activities acceptable
I have a barebones statement, but I have no idea how to elaborate on what I am mentioning. Talking about Rampaging Chariots, and my academic interests (photovoltaics, superconductors and materials). I'm applying for Mechanical Engineering mostly, materials where possible, if that helps
Any and all help is greatly appreciated.
EDIT: And when is talking about super- and extra-curricular activities acceptable
(edited 7 years ago)
Look at the PS builder linked in my signature below - it talks you through the process 
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