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    Can anyone help me write a commentary? My chosen style model is a blog on informing and advising teenagers on self-love, however, my original writing is on informing and advising teenagers on healthy eating. Now I need to write a commentary but not sure how to lay it out and what to write!
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    (Original post by claudiamendes)
    Can anyone help me write a commentary? My chosen style model is a blog on informing and advising teenagers on self-love, however, my original writing is on informing and advising teenagers on healthy eating. Now I need to write a commentary but not sure how to lay it out and what to write!
    I would start with your linguistic tool-kit. I don't know how many words your it needs to be, but just start with whatever your stronger at. So maybe start with saying how you have formed a synthetic personalisation with your audience by particular grammar such as personal pronouns and so forth.

    Your commentary is the same as how you'd analyse a piece of unseen writing. You'd analyse the text by using linguistic terminology and then defining what affect that has on the reader.

    I can't really give you anymore advice without reading it to be honest as I don't know the writing style and what I could suggest you mention in your commentary.
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    (Original post by claudiamendes)
    Can anyone help me write a commentary? My chosen style model is a blog on informing and advising teenagers on self-love, however, my original writing is on informing and advising teenagers on healthy eating. Now I need to write a commentary but not sure how to lay it out and what to write!
    Hey I didn't do English language so can't help you. I just wanted to warn you not to use the exact same wording as anything which people may reply here as it will crop up in a plagiarism check.
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    Work your way through the key frameworks.

    Lexis - formality, register, tone - link to field, function, and tenor
    Grammar - sentence types ect and again link to field function tenor.


    Just do a pageaph on each key constituent and it should be enough
 
 
 
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