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    it's 12:24 and you can't breathe,
    When you think of what you won't achieve.
    The incessant pounding in your head,
    reveals the monster on the bed.
    When your nails scratch your pale flesh,
    porcelain skin turns blood raw fresh.

    the moon's soft glow turns blue eyes grey,
    You know they divert to hide your shame.

    The lack of air to your lungs is tight,
    A tenseness, knock-on state of mind.
    But you know the morning sun will rise,
    And on will come your day's disguise.
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    :clap2:Great poem
    But it is very deep and quite distrubing it makes me worried about you
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    Still 37 days until results day
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    (Original post by PrincessBO$$)
    :clap2:Great poem
    But it is very deep and quite distrubing it makes me worried about you
    Haha oh. I didn't think of that
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    (Original post by Legendary Quest)
    Still 37 days until results day
    Me thinking of what I won't achieve !!
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    (Original post by Legendary Quest)
    Still 37 days until results day
    Why u counting down its 47 for GCSE
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    (Original post by Anonymous)
    Me thinking of what I won't achieve !!
    And on results day you'll probably write a poem about all the A*s you achieve

    It's a lovely poem.

    (Original post by PrincessBO$$)
    Why u counting down its 47 for GCSE
    Me? Counting down? Never...

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    Reading this back I seem like a very messed up person. (I'm fine)
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    Deep.

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    A well written poem. Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
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    (Original post by Wolfram Alpha)
    A well written poem. Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
    Thank you!


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    Thank you!


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    Ahh...what made you reveal your identity?
    Or was it unintentional?
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    (Original post by Wolfram Alpha)
    Ahh...what made you reveal your identity?
    Or was it unintentional?
    It was an accident -.- but oh well.


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    I remember for my GCSE Romeo and Juliet English Lit coursework I did some really extreme analysing.

    One of them was about Romeo constantly talking about the sun whenever he was flirting with Juliet. I accused him of straying away from the boundaries of courtly love in Christian tradition and said he knew this and hence was feeling guilty.

    Back in the olden times before around 500 AD people used to worship the sun. I said since Romeo wanted to remove this guilt, he wanted to flee away from the God of Christianity because of his sins and started imitating these sun worshippers.

    My teacher must have thought I was crazy but I still got an A* for the essay.
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    I remember for my GCSE Romeo and Juliet English Lit coursework I did some really extreme analysing.

    One of them was about Romeo constantly talking about the sun whenever he was flirting with Juliet. I accused him of straying away from the boundaries of courtly love in Christian tradition and said he knew this and hence was feeling guilty.

    Back in the olden times before around 500 AD people used to worship the sun. I said since Romeo wanted to remove this guilt, he wanted to flee away from the God of Christianity because of his sins and started imitating these sun worshippers.

    My teacher must have thought I was crazy but I still got an A* for the essay.

    ok but this is me for every essay I over analyse everything. I did Romeo and Juliet too and loved it, think I made similar points to yours regarding Christian tradition.
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    ok but this is me for every essay I over analyse everything. I did Romeo and Juliet too and loved it, think I made similar points to yours regarding Christian tradition.
    You did? Guess I'm not mental then lol.
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    You did? Guess I'm not mental then lol.
    or maybe we both are...
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    daaaamn deep o.O
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    daaaamn deep o.O
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