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    Hi,

    I'm looking to do an MSc in Business Management and Leadership/International Business Management etc THIS September.

    I am away for nearly all of August so I need to get the ball rolling and my applications done ASAP, so I have written a first draft of my personal statement.

    Is there anyone here who would be willing to look over it for me and give me a few pointers?

    Much Appreciated.
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    Please don't send your PS to anyone over the internet. You have no control over it otherwise. Masters PSs vary a lot on requirements between different universities as well
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    (Original post by *Interrobang*)
    Please don't send your PS to anyone over the internet. You have no control over it otherwise. Masters PSs vary a lot on requirements between different universities as well
    I see it says you are a personal statement reviewer... How about I send it to you? Haha.
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    Highly recommend Wordvice.com when you want your personal statement or common app essays concisely revised.
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    (Original post by Dave lad)
    I see it says you are a personal statement reviewer... How about I send it to you? Haha.
    I (and all other PS helpers/reviewers/advisors/whatever we're called now) shouldn't accept PSs by PM. Plus I have no idea about business masters PSs (I did psychology)
 
 
 
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